PoetryMay 29, 2006 3:04 pm
Japanese Tanka is a form of poetry much like the Haiku but older and with 31 syllables in a 5,7,5,7,7, pattern instead of the 17 syllable 5,7,5 pattern of the Haiku. I have been writing some as exercises. Please enjoy:
The only access
That I have to you is through
Electronic words.
They feel so anonymous
When sent to you in this way.
Eyes seen through glasses,
Peering at them is a trick,
Hard to know and read.
Even when removed it's not
An intimate gaze toward me.
Unattainable
Intimacy is what I
Seek through your touch on
My feeble shoulders and arms
Covered in bruises and scars.
It is hot outside;
Waves rise up from the edges
Of roads and plant life.
A mean sun on my shoulders
Forming pearls of sweat and dirt.



I enjoyed the effort, particularly the last one. Keep writing.
Love.
Comment by Bonnie DeCarolis May 30, 2006 @ 3:04 pm